Heyy Thereby ~ZoombiiPanda

Digital Art / Drawings / People

_{=LaterFuckers-IMAUTUM's Commission<3

Sorry it took a little while~
But I hope you like it ^^

Art (c) Me
Character (c) =LaterFuckers-IMAUTUM}

Critique by ~xReDMemory Nov 8, 2012, 9:43:17 AM

Hello,I'm Here To Give you a Critique~;]

So Lets Start~

Good Things - I Liked the Way you colored the hair,The Legs,And the hands a lot,I Also like that cute little paw you drew

The background adds to the drawing a lot too,

Bad Things -
Well first thing i noticed Is that it seems to be blurred on when her ears are supposed to be

-I Think it will help you if the line art of the ears was after where the blur is,its kind of hard to explain,either that or you should make it look like fur,but i think doing the first thing will help you better.

Also,I Think you should make a better shading to the skin,

-i think a pinker shade to the shading would be good,
But i'm not a skin-coloring expert so

Also Here are tips that i think would make your coloring more awesome!

- I Think that in the hair,You Could make a line of white or little lines
(i don't know the way you draw,so i can't really help you with that,its little white/brighter lines that make the hair look more like hair)

-And in the eyes,i think you should experiment a little,from experience i know eyes are fun to do that with

at least for me,I usually make a white dot,blur it from the bottom,

And Add a bright line that circles the eye from that white dot,starting from the bottom.

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Originality - Well,I Can't really tell since this is a commission,So i will give you 3.5 stars.

Technique - Your Technique is nice,i like your style a lot,i think that when you improve your style is going to be really epic!;]

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That's it! Hope it helped you